Rain Man – DivX Version (Normal Quality), DVD (Good Quality), PDA Version
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IMDB rating: 7.90 Plot: Charley is a hustler. He’s been on his own long enough to know how to work people and situations. He finds that the father who threw him out as a teen ager has died. He’s left him a now antique convertible and something more important, a previously unknown brother, Raymond. Raymond is Autistic, but is able to calculate complicated mathematical problems in his head with great speed and accuracy. Their father has left his fortune to Raymond who doesn’t even understand what money is for. Charley is enraged by what has happened and by his father keeping Raymond’s existence from him for his entire life. He kidnaps Raymond from his residential home but then finds that Raymond will only fly Qantas. The two begin a long road trip that will lead them to an understanding of each other. |
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Actors: Cruise Tom,Hoffman Dustin,Molen Gerald R.,Murdock Jack,Roberts Michael D.,Seymour Ralph,Robillard Kim,Dougherty Dolan,Dougherty Marshall,Dougherty Patrick,Dougherty John-Michael,Adventure,Drama,
Could anyone comment whether this is a good start to a story?
It’s dark in that awful way that allows you to make out objects but not the black spaces behind them. My breathing comes ragged from exertion and fear. The only person I trust in the world lies on the floor beside me. I lean into him and hear that he’s still breathing but it’s shallow and hard won. He’s hurt, I know. But I can’t see how badly. I whisper his name in his ear but he doesn’t respond. I feel his body but there’s no blood that I can tell. The sound of his body hitting the floor minutes before was the worst thing I’ve ever heard.
I feel the floor around him, looking for his gun. After a few seconds I feel the cool metal beneath my fingertips and I almost weep with relief. But there’s no time for that now.
I can hear the rain falling outside the burned-out building, its loud, heavy drops smacking on canvas. It’s falling inside, too, trickling in through gaping holes in the roof down through floors of rotted wood and broken staircases. He moves and issues a low groan. I hear him say my name and I lean in close to him again.
"It’s okay. We’re going to be okay," I tell him, even though I don’t have any reason to believe this is true. Somewhere outside or up above us a man I thought I loved, along with other men whom I couldn’t identify, are trying to kill us, to protect an awful truth that I’ve discovered. I am hurt myself, in so much pain that I might pass out if I didn’t know it meant dying here in this condemned building on the Lower East Side of Manhattan. There’s something embedded in my right thigh. It’s possibly a bullet, or a large spike of wood, or maybe a nail. It’s so dark I can just barely see the large hole in my jeans, and the denim is black with my blood. I’m dizzy, the world tilting, but I’m holding on.
I hear them up above us now, see the beams of their flashlights crossing in the dark through the holes in the floors. I try to control my breathing, which to my own ears sounds as loud as an oncoming train. I hear one of the men say to the others, "I think they fell through. They’re on the bottom." There was no answer but I can hear them making their way down over creaking wood.
He stirs. "They’re coming," he says, his voice little more than a rasp. "Get out of here, Sarah."
I don’t answer him. We both know I’m not leaving. I pull at him and he tries to get up, but the pain registers on his face louder than the scream I know he suppressed to protect us for a few minutes more. If we’re not walking out of here together, we’re not walking out at all. I drag him, even though I know I shouldn’t be moving him, over behind an old moldy couch that lies on its back by the wall. It’s not far but I can see his face white and gritted in terrible pain. As I move him, he loses consciousness again and in an instant feels fifty pounds heavier. But I’ve seen all four of his limbs move and that’s something. I realize that I’m praying as I pull him, my leg on fire, my strength waning. Please God, please God, please God, over and over again like a mantra.
The way the couch is lying, it forms a crawl space against the wall just big enough for the two of us. I pull him in there and lie on my belly beside him. I pull an old crate over toward the edge of the couch and look through the wooden slats. They’re closer now and I’m sure they’ve heard us because they’ve stopped talking and turned their flashlights off. I hold the gun in both hands and wait. I’ve never fired a gun before and I don’t know how many bullets are left in this one. I think we’re going to die here.
"Sarah, please, don’t do this." The voice echoes in the dark and comes from up above me. "We can work this out."
I don’t answer. I know it’s a trick. Nothing about this can be worked out now; we’re all too far gone. There have been plenty of chances to close my eyes and go back to the sleep of my life as it was, but I haven’t taken any of them. Do I wish now that I had? It’s hard to answer that question, as the wraiths move closer.
"Six," he whispers.
"What?"
"You have six bullets left."
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I’m Kelsey. I am fifteen years old, so if this sucks, I want to know, so I can move on with my life. Please just leave ur comments below of what you think of it, and if i should spend any more time on it. Thanks:)
Its cool and intersting. You should maybe look over it a few times see if you should change some things but honestly it is really good
can you answer my question?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=AnTUIF9QKj1SaK2zwen.HHHsy6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20091113190929AAfVvMM
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Tails | Nov 13, 2009
YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING THIS!!! its awesome
I’m loving the suspense 
keep it up girl!!!!vampirelover789 | Nov 13, 2009
You clearly have a talent for writing. I’ve gotta say it started out very nicely and kept me wanting more. Although, your very beginning was very confusing as I had no idea what was happening, but I quickly caught on =) In my opinion, keep this going, this is something you will want to work on and put forth a lot of effort on. Keep it going! And one last thing, a good title would be Seni, which is Latin for six!
Jerrod | Nov 13, 2009
it wuz long so it took a while 2 read and understand it enough2 comment on but i think its pretty good cept id do a little prolouge b4 that about whers shes from. a little description of what she looks like.and how some1 mite want 2 do that and wher they r. but i think its good for a story so far. im not rlly in2 reading like murder mysterys so….its still good tho. if uve ever seen the movie series SAW-SAW6(in theaters now ..haha) but it kinda has that kinda vibe but without the haunted horrific vibe….hope this helps. haha ud prob. b bored waiting for a responce…at 15..i wood break in2 song singing 15(by taylorswift who won everything she wuz nominated for for the cmas i wuz so excited for her!!!)but thats a differnet subject..hahaha. hope this helps and thx for the story! im so boredd…LOL!!!
SingTaylor23 | Nov 13, 2009
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